Yesterday I was with a local group of angel investors who hear seed investment opportunities in the clean energy space. I think that the biggest idea had the worst pitch.
In the venture investing arena, we hear tons of ideas, not many of them can meet the criteria necessary to get an investment, perhaps only a few percent. With in boxes always full of new business plans to review, there is always a temptation to look for the reason to decide to move on.
The entrepreneur was a young African-American man who carried himself with confidence and presented himself in a way that revealed his considerable intelligence.
He opened his pitch with "XYZ company is a minority/woman-owned business. I am personally committed to sustainable, green ....." I found myself struggling to stay open minded. Why did he open with the ethnic/gender background of his ownership and personal philosophy? If we (a mostly white group of angels) were to invest, we'd likely have to structure some kind of clever financial instruments to let him keep that designation and by the very nature of the setting only clean energy opportunities were to be heard. Even after refocusing, I found myself looking for and dwelling on the the "flaws" as I saw them in the presentation. It was 90% into the presentation before he got into the more compelling parts of the story.
After the presentation was concluded, we conferred privately about the opportunity. Most of us were put off by the presentation. One prominent angel, himself a successful, serial entrepreneur, told us that he had invited the presenter. He said that while the entrepreneur is admittedly unseasoned, he felt that there was a real idea worth investigating at least and proceeded to give us the "why should you care" pitch that we didn't hear in the formal presentation.
Entrepreneurs need to structure their presentation to tell their story while piquing the curiosity of the listeners. After learning more of the backstory, I think that I know how that same opening line might have been followed in a way that would have had us all leaning forward in our chairs.
"XYZ company is a minority/woman-owned business. Our target customers are Fortune 500 members who are regularly fined for missing regulatory mandated MBE/WBE purchasing quotas. The US addressable market for our product is measured in the billions of dollars annually."
Now, I still might have been incredulous, but I would not have had any trouble listening as carefully as possible through the entirety of the presentation.
The old saying "you only get one chance to make a good first impression" is never more true than in the entrepreneur's pitch to a VC.